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Thesis: Marijuana use is not safe for teens.
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INTRODUCTION:
Hook: “Ignorance is bliss” has never been more dangerously wrong than in the instance of teenagers and marijuana use.
Thesis: Marijuana poses a potential threat to the mental health of adolescents.
Big Idea A: Correlation between marijuana use and mood disorders.
Big Idea B: Evidence of re-wiring the still immature adolescent brain.
Big Idea C: Not recognized as dangerous by teens because of ignorance.
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BODY
A. BIG IDEA A: Positive correlation between marijuan use and mood disorders.
Topic Sentence: Recent studies have confirmed the long-suspected correlation between the use of marijuana in teens and certain mood disorders such as depression and generalized anxiety.
1. Point 1: Marijuana use by teens has an impact on their moods and may be a catalyst for mood disorders.
2. Point 2: Alters serotonine levels.
a. Specific Example: ibid (means same source)
3. Point 3: Its effects can irreversible.
a. Specific Example: ibid (means same source)
Concluding Sentence: Marijuana alters the mood and may produced irreversible change in the teenage brain. This is especially important given the still undeveloped state of their brain. (Note that there is both a summary and a transition.)
B. BIG IDEA B: Evidence of re-wiring the still immature adolescent brain.
Topic Sentence: (Imagine a super sentence here)
1. Point 1: Teen brain is not fully developed and has more plasticity than the adult brain.
2. Point 2: Paradoxically, this increased plasticity can re-wire the brain in the presence of marijuana use.
3. Point 3: The frontal cortex, center of reasoning and judgment, is still not fully developed in the teen.
Concluding Sentence: The immature teen brain is susceptible to harmful influences from its environment and must be protected. Parents and teens need to know this.
C. Big Idea C: Not recognized as dangerous by teens because of ignorance.
Topic Sentence: Marijuana’s effects are not well known by teens.
1. Point 1: It effects have a half life of four days.
2. Point 2: Twin study shows correlation between early use and later abuse of other drugs.
3. Point 3: Impairs memory and cognitive functions.
Concluding Sentence: This is critical information that teens need to know before they dismiss marijuana as harmless.
III. CONCLUSION
1. Re-iterate thesis: This paper has highlighted the dangers of marijuana use in teens.
2. Quick summation of important/lasting ideas: evidence of causing mood disorders, impaired cognitive functions, and these facts are still unknown in the general population.
3. Final thought for reader: It is of the utmost importance that teens get the real facts. How will Health Canada, schools and parents help teens become fully informed?
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